I had only the droning Mellifluous tone of his voice to counter The shout of the cascade under the window, The roar of the rain and, after it stopped, The slap-happy sound of a hillside, drinking.
I want to see this one in print, too. The rhythm and sound of that last line is perfect.
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Date: 2008-11-23 05:58 pm (UTC)Mellifluous tone of his voice to counter
The shout of the cascade under the window,
The roar of the rain and, after it stopped,
The slap-happy sound of a hillside, drinking.
I want to see this one in print, too. The rhythm and sound of that last line is perfect.